Sunday, March 29, 2009
The Main Character
The main characters in the book are Lindy and Nathan.Nathan isw Lindy's stepbrother.They are not good in school,so they asked their uncle to make them smart.Their uncle make a drink that will make them smart.Then they became smart and two aliens started to chase after them, because they want to make Lindy and Nathan into slaves for their king.
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Sounds pretty strange but please keep to the subject. After "they are not smart in school" (which is good because it describes the characters) you moved into PLOT (what happens). Please change it and add more information about the characters themselves.
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